John Marsden Writing Topic #46
Taking a boring sentence. Start replacing each word with one (or two) new ones**
The business man caught the train to work every morning and caught the train home every night.
Twelve aliens always rode a space-time travelling shuttle to the moon all day and would take a rocket to back to his home planet at night.
**Reference: Marsden, J 1998, Everything I Know About Writing, Pan Macmillan, Australia.