John Marsden Writing Topic #46

Taking a boring sentence. Start replacing each word with one (or two) new ones**

The business man caught the train to work every morning and caught the train home every night.

Twelve aliens always rode a space-time travelling shuttle to the moon all day and would take a rocket to back to his home planet at night.


**Reference: Marsden, J 1998, Everything I Know About Writing, Pan Macmillan, Australia.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s